30/01/2012 04:48
'Whilst in her innocent form, she's a cute girl. Her eyes are rather curious' Not the rest of her, just the eyes. They were transplanted after an accident a few years back - 'and she likes to explore.' I can tell this by looking at her, apparently, so I'll assume she's in full Victorian explorer gear at all times. 'In her alternive personality she will try to kill anything close to her.' Ah, so 'alternive' means 'poorly-contrived and impractical'. I see. 'This will not trigger unless you actually attack her' My word, my character certainly is very perceptive today. 'In this personality her hair covers an eye' Which eye? One of hers? Or perhaps... one of her originals? 'and she looks rather evil.' Do elaborate, please. Does she have an evil goatee, or is she smirking the whole time? 'Eyes: Red'ish'. Wow. So an apostrophe now not only means "Look out, here comes an 's'" but has the decency to warn you a letter or two in advance.
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